Friday, November 7, 2008

Due Monday, November 10

1) Please post your tentative thesis for the research project in the comment section below.

2) Post suggestions for two other students as to how they can make their theses more effective and persuasive.

15 comments:

Anonymous said...

The character of Superman contains a universal appeal, and can be seen to contain different meanings and messages depending on who is attempting an interpretation.

Anonymous said...

Mehndi – body art of henna painting – is traditionally used in wedding ceremonies and other celebrations in Middle Eastern countries due to superstitious beliefs, like brining love and good fortune and protecting against evil. Henna is made from crushed leaves of the henna plant which stains the skin with brown shaded markings for a short period of time.

Anonymous said...

Art therapy is an effective form of treatment for depression.

Anonymous said...

nare i: I would suggest that you cut out the second sentence of your thesis. It doesn't really add to the main idea, but is more of a detail for a later paragraph.

anna eremenko: Think about expanding your thesis. Right now, it doesn't do much besides give a basic idea; a thesis should provide a little bit of detail for the direction of the paper.

Nathan Beeley said...

he existential torment that each character feels by being lost in the world. This existential torment of being a random chance in the universe is a question of the 20th and continues onto the 21st century as human beings try to find meaning to their existence.

To Matthew Hernandez, I like your tentative thesis, you should definitely expand in the same direction that you are going with that thesis, open it up.

To Anna Eremenko, your thesis is strong and carries an understanding of the treatment of depression. If you expanded the sentence to include more information that might make it better.

Anonymous said...

Artists use different forms of art to release an emotion with the audience. Some artists use humanity as the main focus of their work to create a raw feeling for their viewers.

Anonymous said...

To Matthew Hernandez:
Your statement is clear and easy to understand. You state your view on the topic very well. My only suggestion is in certain cases, try not to be too wordy. But excellent job.

Anonymous said...

To Nare I.:
The first sentence seems a bit long. There doesn't seem to be an opinion, or stance on the topic. Try to add more of an opinion statement into your entry.

Anonymous said...

Graffiti art has an important role in urban cities despite the claims of it being a crime.

Matthew Hernandez: Your thesis is really concise and has great potential.

Anna Eremenko: Well established thesis as well as interesting.

Anna said...

I would suggest to Nare that she make her thesis more clear by condensing what she wrote.
Nathan, I like your thesis. You can make it more clear by combining the first and the second sentence of your thesis.

Anonymous said...

Beauty is often defined by the common ideals of people, it is something that people have conformed to, when in reality beauty is in the eye of the beholder.

Nathan: Remember to include the title of the movie so that your thesis is more clear to the reader. I do like your thesis maybe you can expand on how and why the characters try to find their meaning in life but i do think your on the right track.

Kelly: I like the idea if your thesis. It still seems a little to general though maybe you can narrow it down by picking a few art forms and explaining those.

Anonymous said...

I'm not sure if it went through but I'm sorry about the last post. My friend changed my thesis and hit publish.

Explicit lyrics in music and movie content has had a negative effect on youth, causing them to act out and behave in ways they shouldn't.

Nare, I like your idea but you should include something in you thesis that gives the rest of your paper a direction in which to go. What about Mehndi are you going to focus on?

Kelly, I'm a little confused as to what your specific topic is going to be. Is your paper going to be on art forms, humanity as an artists main focus, or raw feelings and emotion?

Anonymous said...

Street art (murals) is a form of inspirational art within the community of Los Angeles

Anonymous said...

my thesis: is about the movie promotions in the film industry. How they promote movies in packaging, billboards, advertising..etc.
to matthew H. what different meanings and messages do u mean. do u have any in particular?
to nare: how r u going to explain that? find a good transition from the believes to what its made of? its a little choppy. explain more..

Anonymous said...

To Anna: Your thesis is clear, but at this point it can go in many directions. Expanding it a little more would set the primary direction of your paper.

To Kelly: Your thesis is easy to understand. You can possibly combine both sentences since they are linked and just expand on each other.